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the night crawled in
sinking in to the sheets
covering our naked bodies till we couldnt see
who was what
we were one
so far in
a mountain of skin
then a sudden shift an akward move
my mind erased and there was you
i couldnt hear
couldnt see to clear disconnected
i flew to space
hazy eyes a crowded mind
all moments lost
that intensity cost

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[The Golden Pen]

I love your poem. It's concise and yet full of imagery.