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so i wonder if they have chosen my fate
i wonder if at once we will make
every turn every move without an extra thought
manipulation of time
is there a way it can be fought? the book is written but do i choose the lines
or keep behind
and hide between
am i to be mentioned oh but once?
Dinah with her lost story
whispered from the tongue just once then lost in the sea of syllables

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[Larry Dyson]

hmm like this one especially because you steped out and metaphorically spoke of poetic license and your existance...'whispered from the tongue just once then lost in the sea of syllables'.