........

she sang out
with a voice full of passion

begging the world

to stop rotating for a minute

and turn the other way

the future seems to be locked in the past

and i just cant handle that she sung

and with lips made of speakers

her soul sung out
so loud so loud
thundering out
her body vibrated with the sound

Reviews

[Pickleby Davies]

This is beautiful. I love the format, and the repetitiveness in line 10. I also love the "beg the world to stop rotating for a minute and turn the other way" part...it's amazing imagery and really wonderful. Love!

[Donald Meikle]

Sang (No sung) just sang. and yes it's ........
I felt almost the same way at 14 crossing the Atlantic in March
just one minute!

[Larry Dyson]

lovely ...safe huggs..Laury