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the stars faded out from my eyes
and now were at each others throats
with a rose and a knife
if i begged you to would you let me hold you close tonight
draped in insecurities you always need a fight
fears and tears blanketing my eyes
my stumbled tumbld words convince you your right
but im just frightened scared ready to throw myself down thses stairs
see i let you envelope my life
my being i said this is it i wont try again
failure only keeps me up at night
and now were at each others throats
and im screaming so silently
my words are mufffled
you wont let me sing
your frightened of the hungry eyes it brings all i have is love and life
and some pain to fuel it alll
and im trying my best to create some kinda joy
transparency is what i crave in my writing and i allow you to see the ugliest sides of me

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

wow! I love how the rhymes are there but their not so obvious. it flows magically and you can really feel the emotion. great write:)