khik

A Poem by brianna vega

sometimes it hurts to breath
he gets me low
so low that my soul doesnt show
oh how i yearn for those moments at night where we lay
tangled close

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I liked the length of this piece, it helps give more meaning to the words. Great use of emotion, nicely penned. Good work.

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Added on October 23, 2011
Last Updated on October 23, 2011

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