bleh

so im playing sims listening to music.....

yeah oh darling sing out sing out to me
reggae jams oh sweet guitar hiphop beats oh beats come
and play me
dancing in the spirit


.......................................
so i lifted up and i drew the moon
i looked inside and i tried to understand you
the worlds in a box and it cant look out the worlds in a box but its getting so heavy i think we just might fall out

so flood flood flood the streets
with love with love with love
times are changing and you and i might be
the next step
so i lifted up and drew the moon
i looked inside and i tried to understand you
the worlds in a a box and i cant look out the worlds in a box but its getting so heavy i think we just might fall out
bnl

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

I truly enjoyed reading your poem and the freedom of emotions and words it represent. Lovely write.

[snickerdoodle]

intoxicatingly spirited romantic free verse