What if (For EK)

What if (For EK)

A Poem by Count Humilus
"

lost friends are still here don't worry

"

 I will never smell lavender again without thinking about her

Prodigy at 15

Her angle to the movie executives,

"what if"

"What if the president was a serial killer??"

What if she never got on that plane

What if they didn't shoot up before the flight

What if she didn't crash into that apartment complex on Fairfax

What if her lavender scent didn't show me around hollywood

What if she never wrote Havoc?

What if she didn't smell of lavender anymore

What if she heard me read this poem

What if... Jessica

What if...

© 2009 Count Humilus


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wow it swounds like u really care abou this girl... i know what u mean with all the what ifs i can a few of those of my own lot of what ifs and what couldv beens but theres nothing i can do to change the past... but i have to say this was very nicely written

Posted 16 Years Ago


Escellent write of sadness and whats left after someone has departed...the what ifs
Thanks for sharing

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is unusual but is scans very well.

The other thing is that it also brings to mind a series of story plots WHAT IF...

I likethe way it makes us question and shows us there could be so many alternatives to any situation, if things had been different.

What if I never read this poem, never wrote this review and you never read it, would anything change at all - then again - what if it did?

Good write

Cheers

jen


Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on February 26, 2009

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