The Last Good-Bye

Its just a short story I was bored and it just came to mind hope you like it

 Falling in sheets, a blanket of silvery thread rushing to the stone cold hard winter ground. Still I stand watching them shoot the 21 gun good-bye. I am frozen with fear because I have lost him, my one true love, forever. I watch as they fold the flag and hand it to me. I fall to the cold wet ground and cry out in pain for the love I have lost. I finally realized that I will never have him back. The only thing I have left is that tree with three simple words "I love you" and the memory of our first and last good-bye kiss.

Reviews

[nishantshah2381]

gossamer words.brilliant

[Courtney]

Thank you guys!!!!

[Krystal Nicole]

Beautifully written. . very sad. You held the reader's attention and drew out their feelings!!! great job!

[Kelly M.]

I loved it. It was simple and short, but so sweet and heartfelt. It was so beautiful. Keep writing. :)