A Grace Upon Beauty

My boyfriend wrote this for me and I thought I would put it on Here to see what people think if his work

Her eyes are brighter than a shooting star,
I am left speechless when I begin to gaze,
You should know I will never go too far,
Always by your side I won't wonder away.

When she smiles I stop and stare for a while,
Her presence is warmer than a suns ray,
Making my day she gives me a smile,
It feels wonderful to see her glowing face.

My favorite flavor is her sweet lips,
Her touch is softer than natures calm breeze,
Every time I taste it my heart skips,
Her hair reminds me of the calming seas.

She is beautiful a true work of art,
She'll forever hold the key to my heart.

Reviews

[gypsy.soul]

I wish my boy wrote things like that for me, but he draws me alot of things

[Erin]

Aww I wish I had a man who was creative lol. Up. Very sweet