Delusion

Impetuous drive in your vain

Your sinful eyes prove that you're disgraced

Uncontrollable desire awakes

The man you never wish to exist

The one who's hidden inside of you

Uncovers the true being you knew

Frightened by the envious resemblance

Try to falsify if there's a chance

Mistaken beliefs that guide your life

Forebears reality invasion

Irrationality is enriched

By self-delusion

Your delusion

Author's Note

Are you brave enough to admit your delusions?

Reviews

[emmajoy]

I'm delusional most of the time, wouldn't know where to start!

Your poem works very well in most places but perhaps needs some editing.. there are small muddles here and there. Don't alter, just re.arrange perhaps.

Thank you so much for sharing you talents.