Breathe

Well I don't know how to describe this other than its a metaphor to describe depression.

I'm drowning in the weight on this world
Everything is suffocating me
Help me I can't breathe

All the signs are there
I'm drowning before your eyes
Help me I can't breathe

Why aren't you doing anything
Do you even care?
Help me I can't breathe

I see your hand reaching down
Pulling me up from the darkness
Help me I can't breathe

The water is going down
The darkness is fading to light
Thank you for helping, I can finally breathe

Reviews

[matpat]

this is a beautiful poem, it drew a picture in my mind, lovely!

[Amelia May]

Oh wow. This is a very remarkable poem. I feel the pain from this poem as I read through the lines. It is so dark yet so beautiful at the same time.