Fine

This is an acrostic poem I wrote using the words "I am fine." These are usually what is going through my head when I say those words.

Is life worth it?

Am i really loved?
My life is meaningless

Falling apart when i want to be together
I want this pain to end
Nothing is okay
Everything is hopeless

Reviews

[EHope]

Your writing is so amazing. You drew me in with "A Woman's Thoughts" and I had to read more. I think what I like is that you are able to put into words what many people may feel. I wish I could do that. To see the underlying analysis of that questions "How are you?" and how we all usually respond. Not everyone is. I love your writing.

[Chris]

I read a poem on the air - World Poetry Open Mic - last nite... called "A Note". It's all about all the WORDS we see, feel, and KNOW - LIVE - between all the lines we write and read... all of the US behind our eyes. Seems you KNOW exactly what I was talking about.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Good poem,but i'm not a great fan of negative endings.. :)

Still,loved how you framed it! Looking forward to read more of your works in the near future! :)

[mattavelli]

Don't seem fine to me. :p
I wrote one of these last year. Yours is better.