If Only

I wrote this from a boy's perspective.

Her hair the scent of raspberries.

The faint sun beams cascade,

skimming her shoulders like a soft blanket.

Dark brown eyes- eyes that see the world so

peek out from underneath a curtain of wispy lashes,

like feathers.

Those amber pools grab me.

I stand. Transfixed.

Losing touch with reality,

entering a world far more idyllic than current.

Velvet lips tremble, sweet.

Red like a berry, kissed by Mother Nature.

Smiling, beautiful white pearls glisten sanguinely.

A bell tinkles from her throat, enraptures all.

Slender waist, curve of hip follows the line

in perfect rhythm.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. Your description is true for a man point of view. A woman who smell good and with a beautiful smile can steal a man soul. Poem is outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote

[deeps]

Losing touch with reality,
entering a world far more idyllic than current.

Love these lines here.
This is a wonderful write
I also like the part of the Red lips like mother nature.
This is wonderful.