Nighttime Perfume

paranoid about being caught and at the same time not caring.

It has that certain scent.

As if they guess from a mile away.

Sherlock Holmes of lust.

The windows left open,

love tickles the nose.

Sultry night, 

mingling with the sweet fresh air.

Stranger, passerby

jealous of our heavenly passion.

Full and musky,

it gives away our secret play.

No longer hidden by a blanket of darkness.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. Such sweet words create a vision of passion and sweetness. The story was amazing. A outstanding poem. I like the complete poem. Ending was outstanding.
Coyote

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write especially the last line.
This is very well writtenand stated. I liked this write.