~ War ~

My description for the meaning and feeling of love

Love is like a battlefeild and also like a war . Once you get in you cant get out. It creates history just the same. Once someone leaves you , you never forget them . They are stored there forever. Love is everything that is worth fighting for through the gloom and the sad.

Author's Note

.. i tend to be an avid writer

Reviews

[yoyob]

see u will be in my memory forever and u know one of the main resons why!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sincere and thoughtful meditation~ you draw the comparisons in a moving style~

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

I have to disagree. War is the result of violence, hate, disrespect, fear and corruption. It's a last resort that shouldn't really exist.

Concussion sometimes = loss of memory, as does dementia, alzheimers and amnesia.

Love is everything honest and true. It shouldn't have to be fought for but I do agree that if something is worth fight for, love would have to be it.

I think you should consider arranging this in stanza form, other than that I also feel it's more like your thoughts than poetry but sometimes poetry is just that, thoughts.

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. sweet, earnest, authentic ... you have a really nice way of expressing your thoughts ...