Love

I live, I breathe. I see I touch. I know you're there, I hear your voice. I wish to meet you. I wish to see you. You speak to me softly, your words like a soft summer breeze that blows away my fears. Your love washes over me, it holds me close, and fights away the cold. I know you're there. I can feel you. I breathe in, and smell the comforting scent of your love. I reach, and am calm in the feeling of your solid body. Your arms reach out and hold me. I am yours forever.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

The invisibleness of love. Good job!

[Mirra]

"I am yours forever."
Awww..this is sweet ^_^! I love this!

[GwenValentine]

Thank you again!!! I'm really glad you liked it!

[Mirra]

Your welcome Cris :-)

[melissa]

This is a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[GwenValentine]

Thank you so much!!

[melissa]

Your welcome

[Hope]

I breathe in, and smell the comforting scent of your love...aah ! That's sweet ! Good job :)

[GwenValentine]

Thanks so much!!!!!!!!!

[Hope]

You are most welcome ! :D

[Sami Khalil]

Fantastico...Please pen on...:)...................

[GwenValentine]

I'm really happy you like it! I will definitely keep on writing! Thanks for reading!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Konigin]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Panda-sama!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are the most amazing creature! Great first poem dear... :) I love it! Great read, great pen! Keep writing! ^.^

[GwenValentine]

"Dear"???? Polar, I am older than you are! But thank you!!!!!!!

[Konigin]

THCHA! i don't need to be older (or younger) to be nice to you and exchange common pleasantries!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And you're welcome. ;P