Black Magic Women (I Knew It).

Black Magic Women (I Knew It).

A Poem by Hiraeth
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A poem

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Your body makes me feel eternal.
Immortal, like im wearing a protective vest that keeps pain from hurting me like metal bullets.
I knew it,
The first time I saw you all wrapped up in leather and lace, a mona lisa beauty in the face, trying to keep up with you more like a race
I knew it ,
You put a  magic spell on me, with your twisted tongue, around you even pain sounds like fun, I lose all my inhibition, I must admit it.
I knew it,
I hate to love you and love to hate you  because bad taste so good, I took one look and I understood, lust.
I knew it ,
You would be the one to do it
The black magic women

© 2019 Hiraeth


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I was attracted to reading this because it's the name of a favourite song (Santana). It was as sultry as I hoped so it was an enjoyable read indeed! Agree with Relic's comment re the button.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I've felt that button inside that gets pushed at the sight of someone hot. Nice writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hiraeth

7 Years Ago

Thank you ! I appriciate it, you have no idea ❤
Relic

7 Years Ago

Anytime. Welcome to the site. (if you're really new). :)

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