Back to You

Back to You:

It all comes back to you

ocean wave sky blue-

echoed reverberations

blended refractions.

Life passes through trivial 

to rejoin behind the veil-

acceptance granted

transparency gained.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

I like how you worked with slant rhymes instead of perfect rhymes.

[carl]

Thank you, sir, much appreciate your time to read and review and compliment - carl

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

The curse of old age. .. all those memories

[carl]

a curse yes and also a blessing - thanks for the read and review - carl

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest, strong and powerful words shared Carl. Us old men learn. We must find something we love, we must find a safe place. Outstanding poetry shared my friend.
Coyote

[carl]

Thank you for the time to read and review appreciate the encouragement to continue the pursuit of poetry - carl

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoy your work and you are welcome Carl.

[Lorry]

Moments forgotten by all except those who witnessed them, in a tapestry of life that we sometimes forget the finer details of, but once the cause is remembered it just feels incredible we ever forgot the reason, swept up along with the tsunami of life going on around it.
Fitting a life unto 2 verses is rather impressive.

[carl]

much appreciate your time to read and review - "tsunami of life" great title may have to borrow that - carl

[Kelly Scheppers]

A reflection of time, poetically defined.

[carl]

Thanks for the read and review - appreciate the encouragement - carl

[Soren]

What a most poetic explanation of life as it passes. It is with time that clarity emerges. This poem is deep for anyone old enough to have experienced it. A lovely write.

[carl]

thanks for the time to read and review - the above seems to be where much of my thought time is spent these days I probably need to get out and about more - be well - carl