In a world full of intriguing opposites .. this is incredibly bi-polarish .. so quick in fact, I had a job keeping up with myself following it .. write on brother carl you are pretty darn good at it .. Neville
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1 Month Ago
sorry about late reply have been busy with other parts of life - thanks for the read and comment - a.. read moresorry about late reply have been busy with other parts of life - thanks for the read and comment - appreciate your encouragement - carl
Carl, I’m genuinely impressed by how masterfully you layer high diction and playful alliteration here. The poem reads like a decadent feast of language.
Each word carefully chosen, both extravagant and precise, creating a texture that’s as much about rhythm and sound as it is about meaning.
It’s witty, audacious, and yet remarkably controlled. A true display of linguistic virtuosity.
100/100
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
your kindness in review is beyond my ability to say thanks, so much appreciate your encouragement - .. read moreyour kindness in review is beyond my ability to say thanks, so much appreciate your encouragement - thanks you - carl
This sounds like my answer to how do you take your coffee. My reply is always "black with two sugars. Stir the first sugar 11 times clockwise and the second 14 times anticlockwise... and I can tell if you do it wrong!"😀
By the way, I can't tell but I still stir my coffee that way, just in case anyone is watching and counting! 😀
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
appreciate your time to read and review , that is a very specific coffee routine - me I drink gas st.. read moreappreciate your time to read and review , that is a very specific coffee routine - me I drink gas station coffee and have even been know to drink recycle at home however I do draw the line at coffee dispensing machines in hallways. -carl
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