Food,mhm.

There's a different type of food I'm talking about guys aha

Eyes are low , eyes are dilated

I ate only 6 hrs ago

Yes, my mood is agitated

2 more hrs passed

Stomach is churning

Tongue is turning

The images in my head are vivid and full of horror 

Because 

The pie of pizza is burning 

My appetite wish it was

learning 

The sweetness and icy of this cake

But is time to wake 

UP 

cause I was stuck in my mind

full of craves and emptiness

I guess this is how I feel about the world and food 

I've missed.

Reviews

[annie lee]

Sounds like a diet. When genetics have so much to do with body shape, size and metabolism, I am rather annoyed that science's only answer for us is: "ok, fatso, you're on a diet." What a myopic and punitive discipline for folks who are already suffering from low self-esteem, skewed body image thoughts, crippling social anxiety and the concrete feeling that it is indeed because they are BAD people. I can gain weight on 900 calories a day -- with exercise. I had gastric bypass and experienced two years of bliss as a "normal" person. But then catastrophic events caused me to turn mindlessly to my drug of choice, food. No excuses -- it is my fault. Egad, didn't mean to holler from my soapbox so much! You see, it's a GOOD poem that can get me all riled up.

[MandaBear]

This kind of reminds me of like if someone hasn't eaten in forever this is how they would feel. Great write as always!

[Vani Jalagar]

Hahahaha ! very funny......u r expressing hunger and appetite in a different manner. enjoyed :)

[Frieda P]

Reads like the nightmare of someone who's been dieting.... we crave food even in our sleep, especially if you're Italiano, fun read!

[J. Kell]

Fun read.
" I ate only 6 hrs ago
Yes, my mood is agitated" this line made me think of how I am an absolute devil if I don't eat, definitely related to that. Thanks for sharing.

[karina y]

Haha aw. Hungry hungry hippos. so cute.

[Baban.A.A]

I very much liked this poem which you perfectly personified our world concerning food issue with some wide meaning buried within. the lines were very simple and rythmatic; and yet easy to read and enjoy. I got pleasure fromreading it and well done thanks for the request.

[Dayran]

A marvelous description of the world perhaps in the sweet tooth of youth. Nicely done.

[Jack...]

Funny how the word appetite can be used for so many different things...not just food. Very cool my friend.

[Demure Penumbra]

I like this one.... probably because of our conversation. It's funny to me, but it has depth at the same time.

[Mariam]

I like it, I feel you here.You write about food but while reading I noticed two main lines: cause I was stuck in my mind
full of craves and emptiness
I can picture the main character starving because of overthinkig...