Spring

Look at the red roses that are rising

Look its so sensitive so surprising

 

But then pollen is just potent

But pills make it impotent  

 

So no more snow, no more hail

It is time to breathe, inhale.

 

Smell the grass, see and hear the ice cream truck pass

enjoy the weather whether is slow or fast  

 

Adore this season, It will never commit treason

It comes in a certain time for a certain reason

Reviews

[Pushkar Prabhat]

great poem!!!
i liked it!!
:)

[cycy]

Adore this season, It will never commit treason
It comes in a certain time for a certain reason

i loved the ending to this one :) its indeed a light hearted piece and it brought a smile to my face

[Ankita]

This is a wonderful poem. I love the idea of how the seasons are a representative of life. And that's exactly what I could see reading this poem- how Spring is representative of a phase of one's life.

Lines...

"But then pollen is just potent
But pills make it impotent
So no more snow, no more hail
It is time to breathe, inhale."

"Adore this season, It will never commit treason
It comes in a certain time for a certain reason"

...are worthy of quoting.

[Nia Hope]

Simply wonderful as is everything you write i really enjoyed the flow and the rhyme :)

[Rose of many colours]

Great piece you display. expressing the environment with such a love,

[Nyx]

I loved the way this was written... absolutely beautiful. great job

[stars are far]

spring ..yeah ..i love flowers and mostly red and white ones :D
well done :)

[Calibaster]

I love spring, the best part is the fact that school is ending though ... in my opinion. :) ;)

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

Ha, love the reference to allergies! As a fellow allergy sufferer, I'm DEFINITELY looking forward to warm weather, but not the clogged sinuses. That part is highly unpleasant.

Hopefully the pills making the pollen impotewnt don't knock me unconscious for the entire season =O

Anyhow. Good poem. Can the snow stop already?

[Blissful Sin]

simple yet interesting. well done!