That One Thing

Is that one thing ...

Makes me feel alright when the sun rises

and when the night arrives. There is a dawn

in me that's never gone.

Is that one thing ...

Makes me think in a different perspective.

I put myself in the other man shoes with 

my own socks.

This mixture produces the truth.

Mind constantly growing yet heart stays with youth.

Is that one thing ...

Keeps this person

on a strive 

a spontaneous drive

For that one thing ...

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

I love the shoes and socks idea...I never thought of it that way before...well done :)

[K.S.78]

I like the line "I put myself in the other mans shoes with, my own socks." It is true that it helps with perspective and if people could do this more often...great write!

[TL Boehm]

There is a dawn in me that's never gone. Words to aspire to. When we can carry ourselves, lit within, that's always the best way to live.

[Peter H]

i like that quote putting yourself in another mans shoes its one that is used alot but what i like more is kants version of which is think of what it does for the universe before you do it for yourself ;)

[Rahul]

It showed what you want to say and your feelings're floating over the words of smoothness. Nice piece of writing and i got something new by this piece how to see a life in a what way.
it's a msg and it's real and amazing write.

[Gaurav Walia]

Very nice..Liked it :D

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Good piece, bro.

[Renée]

Your poem makes me nod in agreement and leaves a smile...because of that one thing ( :

[Jon Roggie]

Every moment can be a new dawn. Nice write

[SyberRose]

Makes me feel alright when the sun rises
and when the night arrives. There is a dawn
in me that's never gone.

I enjoyed that verse very much...Rose:)