Thought

My destination is ahead of me.

So everyone I encounter,

Consider them a frienenemie.

Until proven otherwise.

Because others want to see you

make it to see your downfall

televised. 

Reviews

[Blissful Sin]

I can relate to a lot of feelings and thoughts here. very edgy and to the point. I like it!

-Bliss

[ron]

This is very true. Nice job. Would like it if you reviewed one of mine.

[Onku Ghosh]

A very apt write....people do like to see the downfall of others. That is mainly out of jealousy.....they cannot and do not want others to do better than them in life.Very good,Jason

[Robert Lindsay]

As your freinenemie n reviewer I see the first part sums up the wary attitude in a good concise way
The second stanza goes off-rythym because has two outcomes and probably works if it's spoken not read

[Angel]

OOh....edgy. Interesting term...frienenemies...I can understand why you might feel that way...
But I prefer to trust the people around me. At least, till they give me a reason not to.
Yeah, I get hurt that way...but I get loved, too.

[Haley Harrigan]

Creative rhyme. Loved how you just dropped "frienenemie" into it. The sense of how you feel in this, completely relatable.

[Kristin Lee]

nice drop of the word "frienenemie" Very creative rhyme.

[carol burgess romance]

I like your new word...frienenemie...yes it is the sometimes how to feel before you really know a person...good write

[MandaBear]

Very interesting! Keep your friends close and your enemies closer right!

[Seth Durham]

Cynical. I can relate. The more times I get stabbed in the back, the more careful I am to keep people out of melee range.