Did it?

                                                           In Life,  YOU get to see how everybody acts                                                                                                                                                       and that makes YOU think but YOU can't see how YOU act. 

                                                                       

                                                                       Therefore  many don't think.

                                                                       And YOU are the most important person in YOUR life.

                                                                   This made me think, did it make YOU?

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

Really am speachless at the moment

[Pryde Foltz]

I think; therefore, I am. Do you? Do I what, you might add. Yes, I had too much tea, said me. Giggles

[MandaBear]

Wow.. I guess you could say I was speechless Great job =)

[Nate]

hmmmmm.... deep.... examines myself.... good thing u have going here bro. keep up the good work.

[Frieda P]

YOU boldly went where no one else has gone...yes, it made me think, thanks for sharing your sentiments here Jason. Impressive food for thought in your poetry.

[Avinash]

This is the key to self realization ...almost asking you to have out of body experience to think of yourself as second person and honestly judge Your actions...that's how I see this poem.

[Nia Hope]

*Small explosion in head* that's really deep awesome poem keep up the good work :)

[Aubrai]

It did. Most of the time, man becomes self-centered. It's a me-myself-and-I world. I, man says, know what you are for I see what you do. And that's what the other man says to himself. But another man comes and will say, They're both insane, 'cause I'm the only one who matters here.

It's an everyday scenario. Tis good!