yea.

I guess, my main problem is starting....

Is like commitment, I can't just say darling

so easily, these bad habits 

keep at it and is pleasing me 

teasing me.... Making me really think that 

that's happiness....

Seconds of enjoyment turns to days of crapiness....

I feel this crankiness when my soul wakes up and realizes

all the ruckus and horseplay going on upstairs, my mind....

Live in the moment , they tell me

The past is being camouflaged by the addictions 

and those habits are flying with bright colors towards my future.

....what the f**k?

Reviews

[Solitary Traveler]

These are your own thoughts, and you've already reached the conclusion. Leaving for the moment, if it feels good do it, those are not mantras to live by. They are the mantras people use when they aren't really living. They are breathing, but not really alive. Bathing themselves in sensations, but not in control. When you exercise control, then you are alive.

[Cryingkate]

Love your response

[Great Aunt Astri]

Don't worry, we all have been through that at some point. One day you may wake up with a spring in your foot. I take it the poem was about you, or are you putting yourself in the shoes of someone else?

[Prritiy]

the turbulence of the mind is clearly seen.... hope its clearer now.

best wishes

[gombeggar]

I see a common style between us here, I think...got some good phrases here 2

[annie lee]

We have all been lured to the murky depths by the siren song of "happiness, love, here it is, I'll save it for you." But as you say, mundane days punctuated by crapiness seem to pile up more and more, overwhelming those little tastes of sweetness. It is good for your psyche to shout these things; it helps to wash away the toxins and preserve the sweetness.

[anumenon]

you put all your stress of mind in the poem you mix up ur stress with the poemthat cause a lack of good flow u start in good manner in the middle i think you lost urwrietrs mind that creates a lag no problem dear u can recover it

[Emerald Seas]

Something is up - a quippy rant. Did it help to pour it out?

[writing mojo]

a roller coaster of the inevitable meeting with unintentional...great reflective piece

[Sue]

One day your wit will win you money for your family CRZ - another great poem :)

[Talal Hussain]

An enjoyable read..liked it :-)

[Brittney]

I giggled when I read the last line, nice nice nice play on words. The ending really had me, what the f**k? Is basically a question to everything