I can Never Forgive Myself

Sorry Bunni

I'm so sorry for what I did

You are my whole life

i'm so disgusted

But all I can do is fight

 

It was my lifes worst mistake

I will always love you

It makes my heart ache

But now we can start new

 

I love you more than anything

Without you my life is over

Please forgive me

Reviews

[satanic666]

good poem

[thecoolone52]

intriguing poem, very simple and thats what i like about it............................................. a nice write good job

[Donald Olds]

This is good. I know exactly what this means, and if you have read my writing you've seen I've been through a lot of hell.
Keep it up. You have a lot of potential, so keep writing.
the more writing you add the better you get.
That's what I've done.

[a Messenger]

Short, but nicely done. Heartfelt emotion and good rhyming.
I'm glad she forgave you too.

[Kaelani]

aww chris ive never seen this side of u! it kinda makes me sad but you know ill always love you! not like dana does but u kno wat i mean ^_^

[Sarah]

Very sweet poem. ^_^ And I like how you're able to start over and learn from your mistakes, forgiveness is always a good thing. (: Good job!

Aww that is soo sweet! be happy that she forgave you... depending on the whole situation... I wouldn't have forgave you.... She loves you and you shouldn't take advantage of that...

[chris' girlfriend]

i 4got 2 say this is a very great poem
and yes i forgive you

[chris' girlfriend]

honie bear i love you
im glad were starting new
you are my entire life too :)