To Be

We move
Walks of life
Where we go
We chose

To be alone
Not me
To be together
Maybe
To be one
Absolutely

We talk
Waking loving thoughts
Wondering wanting clarity
We need

To be loved
Not free
To be accepted
Truly
To be me
Only

Reviews

[613]

This is so great. Shines true to what most of us want.

- Brittney

[JacobMarloe]

Thanks very much

[613]

You're very welcome!

[Ariana Omnomnom]

I love this. I don't really have anything else to say because it would probably just be me saying that I love this over and over again.

[~]

the quest to define a purpose and a life mode. to be one with the one that wakes up in us the words that have been sleeping or running for too long. to feel them accept us for who we are.. a good reason to be.

[JacobMarloe]

A wonderful duet. Thank you.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Is it weird that I'm reviewing so fast? Oh well.

I love how it feels like a question/answer kind of thing in that second stanza. I could be completely wrong but that's what it seemed like.

I love short stuff, and this is great as a whole.

[JacobMarloe]

Thanks, your certainly correct and an awfully quick study.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Hahaha, I'm pretty much doing nothing but lurking on here right now, so I saw this pop up in my feed as soon as you posted it. ^-^