I can remember

I remember when we kissed

Just the feeling on my lips...

Now I need to know why

we had to say goodbye...

 

I can remember when you saw

my most intimate flaw

that I was scared

but you couldn't have cared.

 

I remember when we kissed

It kind of had a twist

It's something I have missed

but now you don't exist.

 

You were like a butterfly

I should have trusted your alibi

Now I'm suffering all alone

and our love is unknown.

 

It's hard to say goodbye....

when I never had you!

Author's Note

Just something I made up off the top of my head cuz I'm hurting. THis poem is how I truly feel....although most of it never happened. :)

Reviews

[John Stussy]

Wow, this really hurts to read. I know you said most of it happened, but if that emotion is still there it hurts just the same. Don't be hurting, the guy isn't all that great if he gave you up. At least that's my opinion lol.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What a great way of getting out your pain, thats the great thing bout poetry is the release it presents us with... It's a great piece for being off the top of your head.

[vive la bella]

i really like this poem..its kinda reminds me of the saying " you don't know what you have till its gone" i think its a great poem...nd even if it never happened its still seems like it did i kinda know what your feeling keep up the good work...
how can i add you as a friend?? your page doesn't let me add you...

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

intresting ending. It made me think of an almost couple that had chemestry but then never put 2 and 2 together and made it work so instead it fell apart. I really loved it! Great job.