Don't kiss my lips

This is beautiful!!!

Don't kiss my lips
for they are sore
Don't kiss my lips
for they are undeserving...

 

Don't kiss my lips,
so pink and bright
as they sparkle lightly
in the midnight moon

 

Don't kiss my lips
for they broke your heart
the words that mumbled
tipping off the toungue

 

Don't kiss my lips
for they hurt too much
Don't listen to my lips
for they are sorry as well.

Author's Note

I wrote this just now. I really like this one. Enjoy!

Reviews

[[KL]]

Ana, I don't think you should criticise her spelling.. Seeing as you spelt "poem" wrong.. :P But you are right, she is very talented indeed. =D
[MM]

[Ana_Cristina]

nice poem... Shows all the emotions felt by that person and is very well expressed so you know exactly what they're thinking and feeling. well done. :)
ps: I spotted one spelling mistake in tongue you spelt it as "toungue" but apart from that you are very talented I would like to read more from you.

[[KL]]

A nice write.. Very deep and emotional.. i like it.
[M]

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

kissing is the most intimate thing you can do... it is also how you can tell just how much someone cares... Like this as you question the risks f taking the next step.

[JRB]

a hate heart, nice write,
Jan/uisiom

[Jessie]

This is beautiful. I love it.

[John Stussy]

It is beautiful, you're right, though it's sad as well. And to the guy that likes you, it's worth the risk of getting hurt.