Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

Hurt.

Broken.

Lost.

 

I linger on my thoughts.

Can I trust you?

Do you really like me?

Are your words true,

those words I longed to hear?

This happened once,

you know the time.

My heart so hurt

at your one crime.

 

Apologies.

Hope.

False hope.

 

I let you in again.

I handed you my heart

and the key to open it.

You had control

of every move,

every word I said.

 

Plans were made, future embraced.

But now it feels like you are gone.

Like we have traveled back in time.

Reliving the past

when you were gone so fast.

 

I sit here...

broken...

wishing....

wanting....

waiting....

for you.

Author's Note

I don't want to relive the past. I can't do that again. I can't trust him again if this happens. :( Just a thought going through my mind to ease the hurt and worry.

Reviews

[paradise]

Sometimes love is a real pain but you should nevr give up on it because one day it will be and do what it wishes and it will be exactly what you need and who you need. I'm sorry that the person doess that but always hope for better great poem I reallly enjoyed it but I'm sorry that happened because people shouldn't be given anything less then they really desearve

[Linear]

Love hurts, we all know the pain it can bring, yet time and again we allow love in. Heartfelt poem, well-done

[BlackStar]

This is such a powerful and heartbreaking poem that I can only try stretching my arms in your direction for a virtual hug :(

[charlotte talley]

I understand your meaning of this poem. I once felt this way. it is hard to at times let go then start over again. sometimes you don't know where to start.great write.

[clauds294]

This was a sad write but I really liked it. I can relate and it reminds me of my own work in some ways. I like how you grouped the words and the phrases were very nice. This was a wonderful poem. Poetry always helps to let go of all the tension inside. Keep writing :)

[Jersey]

Using poetry and writing is a great way to pull out the emotions that just won't quit bugging you and it helps to keep you from making the same mistakes twice sometimes. This piece is good. I liked how you paired up single words or fragments of a line with full thoughts and made all of them flow together.

[Sarah McConnaughey]

This is really good! Sad, but still really good.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Beautiful poetry, Sam.
You can write so well... this makes me hurt lol
Really I can feel the emotions..

Chloe

[Gracie-San]

I understand this poem so much. It was really great, and I hope the best for you.

[KatiePie]

Dear God, I felt a broken heart in this, and it STUNG.
If your words pulse with this much pain, I don't think I can imagine how much your heart beats with.
Great write :/ really, you are talented.
-Cathrine