All Because of you

It's hard to think of trust

because I let you in before

...and sat there...

   ...broken

      ...torn apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of friendship

because I know what is coming

...I sit here...

   ...breaking

      ...tearing apart

all because of you.

 

It's hard to think of love

because my heart will twist

...I will sit there...

   ...and break

      ...and tear apart

all because of you.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a sad poem, but is nice to read. I have been there, done that, and still am going through it. I haven't talked to the person that has hurt me. I have not said a single word to him. I can't have another friend like that again. I hate when people act like he does. I have friends that I truly care about and I will try not to make any new ones. This also reminded me of the poem I wrote, but mine is a little different. Thanks for sharing. :)

[the_stoic]

trust is a common aspect of love and friendship .. so this work could have been complete even if you hadn't mentioned trust .. its amazing how we keep on getting involved with people time and again only to get hurt .. but i guess there comes a time when we just have to learn to be alone cause another heartbreak would find us dead .. you presented the emotions simply . nice write

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we hope for great things. Sometimes it don't happen. I believe people with kind and gentle hearts will succeed in time. A sad ending to a strong poem. Better to try to love then be left behind wishing we did. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cheyenne]

wow this is really good. antoher great poem written by you!!

[TadKent]

This is moving, and I know this is sort of a lame comment, but i like how the poem looks like staircases. :)

[Alice_In_WhateverLand]

Simple, easy to understand and you still get your point across. Nice write, well done :)

[Luna Northstar]

Very good, emotional and well written. Heart felt and touching, I can completely relate to you.

[Ashley.M.E]

This is really good, It's easy to understand and relate too. That's for the read request

[Rawr!!XD]

Very emotional, and very well written. The only problem is in the last stanza the first time you say will it is spelled wrong.
Loved the poem. Great ink.