A to Cee

my alphabet starts with you and ends with me

You have the sweetest caring eyes

One look and I simply melt inside

You are different from all the other guys

That’s one fact I just can't hide.

 

I love the way you make me smile

Each day with you brings a new feeling

I haven't felt this way in a while

You’ve given my life a whole new meaning

 

I could go all day, there's so much to write

All the little things I love about you

The sound of your voice makes my days bright

The way you laugh and your cute smile too.

 

You make me want to be a better person

Though at times I can be quite selfish

Loving you has taught me a valuable lesson

Its one thing I’ll always cherish.

 

Though it hasn't been that long

Being with you really feels right

I know every day won't be like a sweet song

But my wish is that we never fight.

30 August 2015

 

 

Reviews

[onelostsoul]

Awww this is cute. I can really feel the emotion behind each line. And great rhyme, so much about rhyme these days seem forced. Yours reads really effortlessly, great poetry!

[cycy]

thanks a lot dear :)

[Gee]

Ahhh,how very sweet this is.Lovely rhyming throughout

[cycy]

thanks a lot gee :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Great poetic rhythm here, Cycy!

[cycy]

thanx so much rita :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Awwww....such sweet romance in every line of this one. The rhythm and rhyme is great. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

[cycy]

thanx so much Lydi :) glad yu liked it

[Shirlena]

Awww... you gone ain't chu' girl ;). I love love and this poem is definitely that! So enjoyed your gleeful spirit in this cycy.

[cycy]

lolx, thanks so much dear :) i love love too but at times it dont love me back though...

[Shirlena]

I don't think love loves anybody really ;).

[Cassie]

This is a very good poem to write to your loved one. Deserves to be shelved

[cycy]

aaawww thanks so much girl, that just made my day means a lot hey

[Penny]

Interesting rhyming scheme, raw emotion, and saying all about love which was not very new but still quite unique to your story. Sweet little piece. Well done.

[cycy]

thanks hun...means a lot hey :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Very romantic and full of sweetness. A joy to read. Bravoooooo

[cycy]

thank yu sami, always a joy to read ur reviews :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly. .......:)......