The Angels Speak

A love poem to share with your loved one.

So many people dream of having a love like ours

So many jealous of these powers

Authors write stories about a love like this

And others read about it

Films are made and songs are written

The films are watched and to the songs they listen

Only to learn of our story

Of the love between you and me

If God asks the angels to give Him a reason to not destroy the world

The angels would speak of this boy and girl

In the distant arms of passion's embrace

Afar, your soul, my heart will chase

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Maria]

This is really good! It flows well. I especially like the ending, and the reference to God and the angels. Causes the reader to contemplate their own relationships. Very well done.

[Dave C.]

Thank you for that constructive criticism