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The lyrics to a love/erotic song I wrote

When the fangs dry up

The tears in us

My breath will press

Upon your neck

I'm sounding off drones of a million moan decree

By reaching for a lock of your hair and pulling ever so slightly

Your ear to my lips without a secret to tell

Be still and know that I will

Respond to your submission

Your submission

I respond

The crave slips
Releasing it's lust on us
For it does know of our yearning

Even wet fire
Approves of our desire
As I draw forth to lay down your hips
My fingers graze your lips

Your submission

I respond

And the heat engulfs us both
And your legs quiver without long suffering

And the urge that bursts through us both
Tears hard cores apart

Your submission

I respond 

Author's Note

How do the lyrics stand on their own?