Trap

I am trapped,
but I don't want to leave,
your trap,
your trap of love,
I want to stay there forever,
not knowing the truth.

However,
I know,
I know you are using me,
I know when I am useless,
death comes.

But that's no way for me to go out,
I feel nothing,
if you aren't here,
I can't go out,
from the trap you made,
to trap me,
by loving me,
using me.

I don't want to know the truth,
I just want to stays,
no matter if your heart is true,
or not .

I just want you,
why don't you understand?
Even a bit.

Author's Note

3rd poem.
Please review, please......

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Some people just cannot see the obvious..

[Dalebear]

It is always good to write your feelings down

Dalebear

[Kimberly]

I know this emotion of hopeless pursuit can be very real for someone your age and it's good that you're writing it out.

[Sara Mercury]

You know, I still can't understand why anyone would put themselves in this kind of torturous pursuit. I guess I find myself on the other end of this poem's viewpoint these days, where men who want to be with me are ubiquitous, and I want nothing to do with any of them. I don't know which is worse - and I've been on both ends of the stick!

A very nice poem. Keep up the good work! xxxxx

[DrSprinkz73]

"I know when I am useless, death comes."
That was the strongest line ,well to me at least, and I really do like this poem for very obvious reasons ..So far it is my favorite!
Keep onWriting :)

[Short.Nerd]

Very Good

[Broken Angel]

I really like this one ^_^

[SimplyDisastrous]

Excellent piece! There were a few mistakes, though. "Brokes" should be "Break" and "Stays" should be "Stay". Other than that it's a really good piece! (:

[HereWithoutYou<3]

It's awesome, you can see all the love she has for him, and how it hurts her that he is pushing her away. I can relate to this really well. Keep writing.