Son

That's my first poem about this kind of topic, I mean the love between parents and their kids.

You are my angel,
my darling,
my sweetheart,
son,
I love you so much.
I love you more than myself.

Oh Son,
You have my blood inside you,
I love you too much,
to punish you,
why do you leave me?

Son,
you went away from your home,
when will you come back?
I fear you won't,
please,
come back son.

I thought of you,
day and night,
my heart is in pain,
son,
have you ever think of me?

Son,
I want to see you,
and to tell you, I love you.

Author's Note

That's my first poem that talks about a mom and son, so please review to tell me what do you think!

Reviews

[Dalebear]

This was a powerful and moving sad poem

Well done

[Kimberly]

Very powerful and moving.

[Short.Nerd]

Awesome!

[DrSprinkz73]

This reminds me of a lot of the young men or boys in my schoool and neighborhood I like the way you wrote it... very Nicely Done :)

[vincentbals]

Nice write.

[Angelauthor1204]

How heartfelt. It describes the emotions of a mother very elegantly. Amzing job

[lavina k.]

Its beautiful.
A very heartfelt piece of your work.
Greatly describing a mothers emotion whose son is away from her eyes and heart.
Thank you for sharing!!!!!

[Candylove.]

There's nothing as beautiful, and pure as unconditional love. An excellent poem, indeed. Thank you for sharing this. :)

[nono]

AWWW! So cute i imagine this is how my mom feels about all of us. Very nice i love this!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was cute. I want a son when I get married and grow up. I know that mothers and sons are very loving towards each other even when they hurt. I loved this though. Thanks for sharing. :)