Dragon Wind

That's my 1st Haiku.

Dragon wind blows hard,

It thunders into my ears,

It leads me to live.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Is it a Haiku? If yes, do you know how to write a Haiku? Cause you have some problem in thoese sentsence. The poem is good, but I know you can write it better next time.

Nicoletse

[Dalebear]

Good Write

[the in between]

nice imagery :D dragons are the coolest ! i've never tried Haiku props there for doing it for the first time ;)

[Kimberly]

I've never been able to do Haiku so I don't know if you've hit the notes right or not. I can never remember the rules. Kudos, though, for breaking out of your comfort zone.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Its not bad, but its not a classic Haiku. One of the phrases I always use is "Don't fix it if it isn't broken" Classic Haiku's aren't broken, so don't try and spice em up kay? Thanks ^-^ Keep it up

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of this poem. The winds will whisper secrets of a new journey. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice haiku. Pretty good for a first one.

[StacyPerry]

enjoying.

[Angelauthor1204]

It's pretty good.

[Moonflower]

This is my favorite work from you! Its just lovely, doll. :) Beautiful work.