Two Love

You kept saying

you love me

I knew that

months ago

but I can't love you

I love someone else

but you don't know that

you think

we can fall in love

with each others

The truth is always hard

I didn't want to hurt you

to tell you the truth

my real over

get angry

with you

he thinks

you stole me

I kept telling hm

you can't

or

can you?

Time makes me

love you more

I started to forget

my real love

and I began

to love you

to fall in love with you

What should I do?

Actually

I should love him

except you

but now

I love you more

that's a disaster

a huge one

who I choose

is controlling my future

I know

if I don't tell

you guys

who I actually love

this will just

cause us pain

every of us

will be hurt

So

two of you

please

don't get angry

if I tell you

my feeling

and who I

actually love

Author's Note

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Reviews

[YYPSNicoletse]

Awsome chapter!

[Dalebear]

This is a good poem

[Rhonda]

this is a fantastic poem

[Kimberly]

Good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

When you torn between two lovers. You are bound to lose in the end. A powerful poem. Some decisions in a life are very difficult. A excellent poem. I could feel the emotion and sadness in your words.
Coyote

[Sweets]

I liked it !
Nicely written

[Short.Nerd]

Its a bit scattered I think.. A few things don't make since to me. It has a good start though (:

[Angelauthor1204]

nicely done.

[Adelia Alighieri]

This is a very good write. A little romance, a little emotion fit in perfectly.

[Akshat♥]

i actually liked it...forget about the rhythm.this poem touches my heart thats it...nothing more about it...Great write:)