Nothing to Say

What should I do?

No more things to tell

no news is bad news

no more to teach

cause you are perfect

Author's Note

It might sounds strange, but just please read it.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

This poem holds such a beautiful thought, it might be simple but a few words can say so much.

[Rain Kissed Secret]

Simple and straight to the point. Thank you for not wasting my time with nonsense. Good job, keep it up

[Forever Mine]

This is very simple for sure..... i'm not sure what to say really......

[Red]

I don't see how this is poetry. Sorry, but I don't see it.

[Courtney]

It seems like it's so simple yet so complicated.
I really like it!
5 stars!

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

Short and simple, what else needs to be said to it? When a writer says its done from his or her heart, it's done, no matter what others say. Good job. Sweet job.
-Yin

[Coyote Poetry]

Perfection is in the eyes of the beholder. A very kind and gentle poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[~Lizzy♬]

Maybe putting more depth and words into your poems would work more. Try to use descriptive words and that might help you. ;)
Overall, I really loved it! ;)

Peace & Love,
~Lizzy~

[nono]

Anyone can feel like this. I know I do no matter what people just won't listen, because I'm a kid. Nicely said!

[Undying Glory]

it's not strange at all, quite intriguing actually. a few points to note:
it's "no news is bad news", the "the" is not needed here. and also it's "It might sound strange". nice work and keep this up