What, Why

What am I doing here
Why am I here
How do I get there
Aren't you hearing
my every word
I need you to help
give me knowledge
give me anything
anything you know
I started to become useless
so make me back
to the old me
cause you
is my one
my magic key
which can turn
everything back
give me knowledge
give me anything
anything you know

Author's Note

I know this sounds strange!!!!!!

Reviews

[Fontane Wong]

It is sweet and sad.....but still, I like it! It's very nice. What a good poem! Good write!

[Inkcognito]

A clear outcry in yearning of learning...every day brings a fresh learning curve, every new experience offers an opportunity to gain knowledge... embrace, enjoy...absorb!

[Dalebear]

I like it it nice and sad
Keep writing

[Kimberly]

I like it. The repetition is great.

[Sweets]

It doesnt sound strange at all !
I loved this "I started to become useless
so make me back
to the old me"
It explains how much he/she makes you feel better =)

[Trevor]

Not a great visual, but so sweet and sad .....

[Aven]

I found it imaginative. I do agree with Miss Coral, it would help to bring in some visuals, but overall it is a very nice poem.

[Akshat♥]

some poems are extraordinary....this is one i'm searching...good job:)

[Short.Nerd]

Good Job

[nono]

What I do you could call it that! lolz this is nice though good job!