Be a Bird

Be a bird
fly for freedom
fly around
search for truth
watch out the window
you might find lots of things
flying
who are free
imagine you are one of them
to enjoy
to feel
what they feel too

Be a bird
fly up the sky
feel freedom
touch the sky.

Author's Note

What do you think??

Reviews

[Closedown]

It's adorable! I loved it.

[ashley]

This is interesting. Nice poem, inspiring. Good job! :D

[hannah]

An interesting piece that has good imagery. Freedom was expressed well but could have been further expressed. Short and straight to the point.

[Gheeneil]

It is only through flying high when we see the world widest. Interesting write. Keep writing.

[loowzerX]

How sweet! :)

[nono]

Yup be a bird. Cause it's easy to go from here to there...ect. ect. But this is wonderful and this makes me want to be a bird more than I do. lol Nicely done!

[~Lizzy♬]

I loved the way you put the image of a bird flying through the midnight sky in my head. I don't know what image you were going for but, that's the beautiful image going through my head. Loved the flow of the words straight from your eyes. :)

[Short.Nerd]

Very Good

[Dinesh Sairam]

"Those little nimble musicians of the air, that warble forth their curious ditties, with which nature hath furnished them to the shame of art." ~ Izaak Walton.

A simple and good descriptive. I always have loved birds. But I'd say, you could have written more :) Keep writing.

[Hello, Goodbye]

You poem hints at the aspiration of being something that excels I like to ponder on the possibilities life gives us so much to worry about.. I appreciate the kind reminder of the possibilities of freedom..