Do You Love Me?

Do You Love me

Do you love me?
I don't think you're sure
it seems you love me
but only as a friend
how much you love me?
How deep you love me?
Why there's no answer
do you hate to hurt me
by telling me the truth?
Do you love me?

Author's Note

That's very fake, I know, but what do u think???

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

This piece shoots straight to the truth "Do you love me" . Awww I've asked that question so many times . We all want answers especially when it comes to love but most people are just to childish and unable to say there real feelings no matter what. It's much better in the long run. Anyway lol , I liked this short poem it really got to the point. Nicely done.

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questions are fine..but to engage the reader, you need to express your feelings to ..how does this make you feel, why do you feel this way etc..Just a series of questions can seem a little hollow...The emotion is there..just wanted a little more..

[HopelesslyDevoted]

good job! you took a cliche subject and turned into something all your own.

[CrashDavis47]

Good! thought evoking..