Is This A End?

Is This The End?


Is This the end?
Or this is the start?
do you love me?
or we are broken?
why can't you tell
what do you think?
What do you feel with me?
Why do you always cover your feeling?
Do you still care me?
Or this is the end?

Author's Note

I personally don't like this poem, this whole bunch or Qs. but still, I've to write it, what do u think?

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

So many times I had these questions, I wish I would have demanded answers to them when I had them. Looking back, I should have demanded answers to these question. Because of that, I love this poem. Perhaps its the vulnerability of finding the answers that keeps one from asking these questions.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very cool! i love poems that are centered around questions, it makes the reader wonder with the writer. gives them something to think about, something to answer for themselves. i like it!

[Roxi L]

Life is a big questions soo this was great
Roxi
Writing keeps the dream alive

[sarah]

Questions are good! so is the poem!

[Norma M Sutton]

I don't much care for it either and even its shape is making fun of you. See how it's got its tongue stuck out?

[Coyote Poetry]

You ask many good questions. Life has many twists and falls. We need the answers to all your questions. But a lot of love and holding on tight is the key. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[the_stoic]

so many questions and doubts in a heart that's devoid of love .. sadly there is no one to answer them .. well written