Your Words

Your Words
Cheer me up
I am screaming
cause of your words

Your Words
Stamp me
like a knife
your sharp words
twist my heart to pain

Your Words
comes out
without a think
do you notive this hurts?
Even sometimes it cheers
do you notice
what have you say?

Your Words
can be hard
can be easy

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Sounds like he gave you alot of mixed messages and manipulated your feelings with words and that isn't fair.

Good Write
Dalebear

[Alicia™]

You've got a really nice idea here!

[Kimberly]

Very good.

[Marie Harrison]

Been there, sounds like he sends mixed messages.

[Angel Bird]

Strong and impressive, as also thought provoking. Yes words can do so much either way. Great write.

PS.: A little editing could make it even more powerful ...

[sarah]

wonderful expression of emotion!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

sounds like it could be made into a pretty good song

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what a beautiful expressive poem :)

:)

[Loner]

Really thought provoking.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! such an in depth piece: we have to watch what we say good or bad even the simplest things can hurt someone.
Excellent write.