I am Wrong

You love me,
You always do,
no,
I am wrong,
you never love me,
you are using me,
time doesn't change anything.

Now We are both in danger
mistaken love,
never going to be real,
this is the image
you have given  me,
of your fake smile,
of your fakeness.

Don't lie anymore,
I know I am wrong,
you never loved me.

Author's Note

Tell me what do you think, I think this flows bad, I am still figuring a way to solve this problem.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Coyote Poetry]

When we learn the truth. No anger is as terrible as a woman temper. I like this poem. Strong and to the point. I like the ending. A very good poem.
Coyote

[Kimberly]

Very good work. I love that you seem to be working some things out with your writing instead of allowing them to fester.

[Undying Glory]

nice work here, and i do like the flow. you did misspell "anymore" but what does that matter? great job!

[Lilly]

I think the flow of this is ok...
It seems raw and true - as if you have just let it all out by writing...
Nice work.

[sarah]

This flows wonderfully! and it is a hard thing to except that someone doesn't love you great work!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I think it's an excellent poem!

[Loner]

Beautifully portrayed.

[Marie Harrison]

I was in this type of relationship before. You've truly captured the essence of such a relationship. It is a wonderful poem, but it was almost painful for me to read. Great writing.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

in think its cool cause you just let it out, by letting your feelings out it flows by itself without you having to even try