If you Smile

You always blame,

this world is unfair,

yes it is,

but if you can smile,

wont everything be better?

 

If you can smile,

I will hold your hands,

whisper to your ears,

this world isn't that bad,

just see how you see it,

maybe someone is crying,

but if you can smile......

Author's Note

What do you think?? I will add a photo soon, cause libary computer wont let me to download or upload anyhting!

Reviews

[Loner]

Very touching.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I like this its so positive great job well done.

[.]

~Smiling here-great poem :)

:)

[Kimberly]

I think this is really, really good. I like it. I'd fix the grammar and spelling errors, of course, but otherwise this is good.

[Lilly]

Some spelling errors in this. A nice positive poem and message

[Marie Harrison]

From the heart of a genuine optimist. Love this uplifting poem. Put's a smile on my face. :)

[Jami Nicole]

I like it, it's honest and simple. If everyone smiled then they wouldn't be in such a pissy mood all the time. Great write. :)