I am Sorry

I am so sorry,
for loving you,
I know I can't,
you have your girl,
but why don't you choose me?
We can live happily together,
without pushing anyone.

I am so sorry,
For still caring you,
I know I can't,
but I can't control myself,
probably enough,
to stop loving you
I am sorry.

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Loved it! Forbidden fruit captures our heart so often. Lovely.

[Kimberly]

Beautiful. One of your best.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Nice emotion on loving someone who doesn't love you back!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

I like it. It shows that you can't control who you love. Nice job!

[Jibey]

A simple unaffected poem... saying what it says... :-)

[Sweets]

This is wonderful, but there are a few mistakes
"We can live happily together," (only if you meant leave, as in go away)
"For still taking care of you"
._. it's such a beautiful poem :)
So sad and loving
Great job!

[Lilly]

I know what you are trying to say here but I think it's written in a way that's a little confusing at the moment- but I know you could easily fix that :)

[Jami Nicole]

All I can say is if my day wasn't already weird, then it just got that much more depressing. It's a great write. :)