Forever We Have

Seth chuckled as he played with my hair " You know what? You are being so Betty." I laughed lowly, " so? Is that wrong?"  Seth sighed " No." As he turned away and looked back, and asked " Let me." I looked up " What do you want ?"

Seth looked down, meanifully " You." I gigled softly into his ears " I am yours." Seth pursed his lips unhappily " You misunderstood me." I bit me lips " What do you want then?" Seth blinked at me " Guess." I said steadily " I don't want to guess."

Seth sighed " Fine" As he dragged me down and touched my lips with his. The kiss was urgent, as his hand suddenly burnt mine. I tried to push back, no, not tonight.  I pushed him off, as I moaned " stop that Seth."

Seth loooked up " Isn't that what you want?" I shocked, sadly " Yes, I do want nights like this, but not tonight." Seth looked down again " Why?" I bit my lips again " Just not tonight, I am bit of...... emotional tonight, ok?"" Seth nodded " Fine."

I smiled, and brushed his lips " Thankyou."  Seth smiled back " We have plenty of time for that." I sighed '" Yes, forever."

Author's Note

I can't say it's a love story, but I try as hard as I could to make it sounds like one..... please don't me too pointy at my mistakes, I have never written a proper love stories! Do you think the title is good?

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good Job

[Short.Nerd]

nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your short story. Save the good things for when you are ready and the moments are precious and long. I like the positive ending to the story. A excellent story. Thank you.
Coyote

[Undying Glory]

interesting work, this was quite a well-written chapter. i like it a lot that you're trying to branch out, now that's great! if this was your very first love story then this is where you make your mistakes and learn! nice work

[Athena Ramos]

i like it~ i kinda got the feeling that the girl doesn't like the idea that she's going to be stuck with Seth forever :D
am i right? X3

[Loner]

Beautiful love story do continue it please, besides the polishing part on the grammar its an excellent story loved it as always.

[Kimberly]

Actually, I like this. Of course, clean the grammar up a bit, but it's a good 'love story.' Not all love stories have to be sweet or romantic, most of the time real love isn't. It's about the compromises we make, the sacrifices, and the choices. This is great in that regard. There's always a scene in a relationship that is the microcosm for that relationship, this could be theirs.

[Jibey]

I didn't see a lot of love - his interest appeared to be sex and her appeared to be no sex... lol Why would she push his 'burning hand' off her hand?

[Marie Harrison]

It's a great love story. l liked it!

[AloysiaVerben]

It a great little story, with a cute ending :)
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