I Love U, speech finish

You thought I was afraid of you,

you thought I was freaked out.

I was not,

I was afraid I would loose you,

I was freaked out 

caused I thought you would leave me.

Why didn't you understand?

I was only scared,

i was only freaked out,

that I would loose you?

Why wouldn't you understand a bit?

I wanted you to be with me,

I wanted you more than anything,

anything in this world,

anyone in this galaxy.

I just...

couldn't leave you,

not if you wanted to,

tear me apart.

Author's Note

Something come up in mind lately...

p.s. its no true ( I'm only saying this cause my classmates are on here and I afraid they will make fun of it!)

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

When you care about a person...you could never look silly.
This is incredibly honest though. Well spoken.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

you shouldn't be afraid of what anyone thinks, i spent years trying to please people and it never pays off. just be yourself and fully express your emotions!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel and emotion in the poem. I like the flow of the story. Fear of losing someone can break a heart and cause pain before it happen. I like the ending. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Ashley Myers]

being in love is a scary thing, and the fear of losing that one person you gave your heart to overwhelms anybody!

[Julie Beth]

great job i lolvede it :)

[Loner]

Really touching so heart warming that it goes and hits you right at the center
of ones heart. Beautiful expression.

[FallenHeroXx]

Stick their head up their asses... And really beautiful and great poetry you got going here.. Keep it coming. Awesome truly amazing and awesome to me.

Fallen

[Midday_Mystery]

Well, tell your class mates to go stick their heads in a bucket of ice. I think this is beautiful and very sincere... You did a great job writing this and it conveys alot of emotion.... 100/100 from me.... Great job!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

I know someone who'll relate to this quite well indeed. This is a great piece of work, really well written and a nice show of feelings here. Good job, keep up the good work!~

[reminder]

I like the intensity. There is a sense of regret that speaks powerfully-well done!