Did You?

I tried to tell you the truth,

how it torn my heart,

and broke it in little pieces.

You stepped on it hardly,

and I screamed,

I yelled sharp,

my voice torn already,

but you didn't care,

you care about yourself,

you care what's good for you,

you never remember me,

did you?

I found hard to go away,

caused you're always the one,

who I supposed to love,

while I was the one,

who you should love,

you ignored the truth,

left me torn,

left me crying,

you left me,

did you?

I forgot when you went away,

all I remembered was the pain,

how painful was it when you went away,

how it hurt me, so much,

that I hated it much as well,

you did know what you're doing,

did you?

Did you know you  hurt me?

Did you?

Author's Note

Well, another pop in head poem, don't really sure why I write it actually :(
Maybe is because someday today, my classmates kept laughing at me, and it did helps me think of.. 'this'

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Sad feelings in this poem!

[KAREN]

Great flow! Good emotions! Very sad, but a good way to express your feelings!

[thoughts of jade]

this really hurts...it may be a sad poem. but i sure do love it!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, everyone on writerscafe seems to be writing about heartbreak and pain today... this really good, but its very sad... made me think about the hurt i have been feeling all day.

[Chelsea]

Ouch, this one hurt :( I hope your feeling okay.
Heartbreak does hurt, but you gotta pick the pieces and move on. Any guys treating you like this doesn't deserve you!

[Linear]

If he didn't know he does now.........I enjoyed this poem Cynthia, and yes often the ones that just pop up are near the very best

[Maureen Mwaniki]

Something every broken heart can relate 2!and no i dint know but now i do:-P i like the poem,its flow and the rhetorical 'did you?' sad but great work!

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

I like this poem! It's quite good. It flowed better than I imagened it would.

[Geralyn Miller]

sometimes the best poems are the pop in the head kind. Heartbreak is heartbreak, no matter the source, it all hurts.

When your classmates are being poorly brought up little morons; just consider the source, who cares what cockroaches say and do!

[Arsenic Nemesis]

A very strong piece of writing here, the demonstration of heart break was amazing - keep up the good work!~